Sunday 30 October 2011

More ON THE JOB!


After seeing the picture above, the Room Four children wrote a short piece of writing relating to it.  Here are two examples of what they wrote!

I was in a police car.  We had to go and catch these three men who were doing drugs.  We caught one of them and put him in the car but he got out and was on the run.  He jumped over a fence and went into a house to try and call his mates.  We found him and caught him again so he went to jail.  He broke out of jail and is still on the run today…

By Thomas K

 'Faster faster' I said quietly.  'Oh no, the police are catching up.  Oh no, they have guns.' 'Come on hand me your gun' I said to Jessie.
'NO!' yelled Jessie, 'I am trying to drive stupid!'
'Yea, I know that but I am trying to shoot but the only problem is I don't have a gun,' I replied. 
'I AM NOT GIVING YOU THE GUN!!' Jessie yelled back.
'Ok man, I get it, ok?  It's ok any way, I will hit them with this sack then.  YAY I got them and they have stopped.' I breathed a sigh of relief.
 '...THAT WAS THE MONEY YOU STUPID EGG!!!' yelled Jessie!   

By Meadow

6 comments:

  1. Great writing Thomas and Meadow! From Mr B

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  2. haha very funny meadow thanks for
    putting me on your blog

    From jessie

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  3. chur room 4 kai pai tu meke from iehu kokiri

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  4. I like that you've practice your writing by doing on the job thumbs up
    by kyree

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  5. Nice writing Thomas K, your story was interesting, hope you catch the man one day haha. From Inderdeep

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  6. Nice work Thomas, it was a really creative story. You can be an author one day!

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