Tuesday 25 October 2011

On The Job!


Room Four are ON THE JOB first thing in the morning.  We start the day with ON THE JOB, a writing activity to get our minds working straight away.  Today Mr B showed us a video, and we had to write what happened next.  

Here are some of our stories:

The fluffy cat rips off his head and takes his head to the kitchen . He pours the sticky red blood into a tall glass with ice and a lemon slice. He looks through the Brain Cook Book and he finds a perfect brain sti fry with fingers on the side.  He borrows eight juicy fingers. At the end he cooks it all with a pan of oil and coriander.  

PS: Don't mess with him!

By Caitlin


The man wakes up and is very angry. The cat has given him claw marks by his eye because he wants to get fed. After he gets fed the person goes back to sleep but the cat does it again because he wants to go outside to do his business. So the man wakes up to let the cat out but when he is waiting, he falls asleep and lands on the cats business!

By Thomas H


 The man wakes up and runs away from the cat.  Then the man calls the police and says that his cat attcked him.  After the police comes there, they contact the animal control group and they come and take the cat away.

By Inderdeep


The man wakes up and sees the cat playing with his ear, so he put's the cat in the naughty corner. The little fluffy cat thinks about his mistake and and writes a sorry letter. Then when the cat is sleeping the man play's with his face. They get into a big fight and the cat moves out. Then the cat comes with her boyfriend the dog and the dog attacks the man.

By Iman



If you would like to find out what happens at the end of this video, watch it here.

3 comments:

  1. On the Job...What a great way to become creative writers who excel. I just watched how the video ends LOL. What a hoot. I wonder if Mr B's bedroom is as messy as this guys? :) Mr Larsen

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  2. Nice writing Iman i liked when the cats boyfriend comes keep up the good work

    from Miss Butcher

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  3. Wow Iman, nice work on writing for on the job. I really loved it and keep up the good work!
    From Patty
    xoxo

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